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Congratulations!

A. The better call Saul on the video demo is cheerful. Thanks for putting a smile on my face.

B. You want to convey simplicity, then do that on the copy. For example, instead of x bullets each with action, make it short, resize, convert, rotate etc your video.

Same for images and audio.

Put the demo video right next to the declaration (“show it, don’t tell”).

There is some repetition on the Text, literally one next to each other. e g

    The Smarter Way to Edit Your Videos, Photos, and Audio

    Everything you need to edit your videos, photos, and audio effortlessly
Or

    All-in-One Tool Video, audio, and image editing in one app

    Space-Saving One lightweight app replaces multiple tools
If you come to simply my life, make sure your communication is simple, concise and clear.


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